A.N. Aw man did I struggle with this! First off, I've missed the deadline, so probably won't win the contest, but far worse than that is... this is nowhere near as scary as I wanted it to be! I dunno, just couldn't get it to be frightening. Was it anti-climatic? I feel like it was. Hm. Maybe I should have been more explicit or used more torture but I'm not into that kind of horror, more the psychological stuff. I dunno. I'll work on it later. See if I can make it scarier, but, hm, stuck right now. Anywho, we're near the end now. This was meant to be the final chapter but as usual I'm too wordy for my own good. I'm guessin people are starting to put it all together now anyway.

Massive thanks to my commenters, glad ya'll like it so far

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